GLA Argumentative Stuff

 Essay Example (can you find the error? :D)

Some quick criteria:

GLA 12 Prep Materials

 More Student Examples of the 2nd written response

RUBRIC for all written responses

GLA SAMPLE 2

GLA SAMPLE 2 ANSWER KEY

GLA Incoming!

 Link to English 12 GLA materials

Writing Topics: English 12

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Block A & D

The neighbours believe they are acting reasonably and responsibly. Why does Munro make their actions feel disturbing to the reader?

To what extent is Mary morally responsible for what happens to Mrs. Fullerton?

Block C

How does King use humour and absurdity to criticize colonial attitudes toward Indigenous culture?

How does the story challenge the idea that museums are neutral places that simply preserve history?

English 12: Omelas part 1

Answer each question. Write a paragraph or more. Include at least one quote to support your position.

1. Why do some people walk away from Omelas instead of trying to rescue the child?
2. Which is more morally defensible: staying in Omelas or walking away?
3. What is the significance of the citizens seeing the child themselves, as opposed to simply knowing that it's there?
4. What does the story suggest about the relationship between comfort and morality? 
5. In what ways can Omelas be interpreted as a criticism of real societies in which prosperity or comfort depends on the suffering of others?
6. Why does Le Guin leave the destination of those who walk away unexplained? What does this ambiguity add to the story?

We'll be revisiting these questions and other similar ones when we return this Wednesday/Thursday!

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Argumentative Topics: Animal Farm

These are our topics for Animal Farm. You 

1. To what extent is Squealer responsible for the animals’ suffering on Animal Farm? You may argue that Squealer is equally responsible because he spreads propaganda and defends Napoleon’s actions, or that he is less responsible because Napoleon holds the real power.
2. What is the main reason the pigs are able to gain control of Animal Farm: the animals’ lack of education or Napoleon’s use of fear and violence? You should choose which factor is more important and explain why.
3. Is Boxer’s loyalty more helpful or more harmful to Animal Farm? You may argue that his loyalty supports the farm and helps the animals survive, or that it allows Napoleon to gain more power without being questioned.

Vocab: Chapter 5 and 6

 QUIZ ON FRIDAY!

• Disheartened — feeling discouraged or losing hope
• Rations — fixed amounts of food given to people or animals
• Factions — smaller groups within a larger group that disagree with one another
• Controversy — strong public disagreement about an issue
• Canvass — to ask people for their opinions or support
• Tactics — planned methods used to achieve a goal
• Capitulated — stopped resisting and agreed to another person’s demands
• Concealed — hidden or kept secret
• Retribution — punishment given in return for a wrong action
• Surrendered — gave up control or stopped fighting
• Unaccountably — in a way that cannot easily be explained
• Commissions — payments received for arranging sales or business deals

Class discussion - in groups we will work with these questions. Each group does a different one:

1. Are the animals still free? By Chapter 6, are the animals truly freer than they were under Mr. Jones? Consider their work, food, choices, and ability to disagree.
2. How does Squealer manipulate the truth? Identify the methods Squealer uses to persuade the animals. Why do the animals accept his explanations?
3. How is the windmill used to control the animals? Does the windmill represent hope, progress, manipulation, or all three? Who sacrifices for it, and who benefits?
4. Boxer: admirable or dangerously obedient? Are Boxer’s beliefs—“I will work harder” and “Napoleon is always right”—strengths, weaknesses, or both?
5. How are the Seven Commandments losing their power? Why do the animals doubt their own memories when the rule about beds changes? What does this show about literacy, memory, and power?

To answer the question - show reasons why your group thinks your answer is correct.

Updated writing: July 22

 How does Napoleon gain control of Animal Farm by the end of Chapter 5? Explain how he uses fear, propaganda, and the removal of opposition.

Find evidence of each of the following, and integrate the evidence into a single paragraph with brief explanations.

1. Fear and violence: Napoleon secretly raises the dogs and uses them to chase Snowball away.
2. Propaganda and manipulation: Squealer changes the explanation of events and persuades the animals that Napoleon is protecting them.
3. Removal of democracy: Napoleon ends the Sunday debates and gives decision-making power to the pigs.

Written Response - Chapter 1 - 4

 Who seems to be the strongest leader so far: Snowball, Napoleon, or Boxer? Explain your choice using examples from Chapters 1–4. What qualities make this character an effective—or ineffective—leader?

Write three developed paragraphs.

Paragraph 1: Introduce your choice

• Clearly identify the character you chose.
• Explain what you believe makes someone a strong leader.
• State your main opinion about the character.

Sentence starter:
Of the three characters, ______ appears to be the strongest leader because…

Paragraph 2: Use evidence from the novel

• Describe at least two important actions or decisions made by the character.
• Include a quotation or specific example from the novel.
• Explain how the evidence supports your opinion.

Sentence starters:
One example of this character’s leadership occurs when…
This demonstrates that…

Paragraph 3: Evaluate and reflect

• Discuss one weakness, problem, or possible danger connected to the character.
• Predict how this character might influence the future of Animal Farm.
• End with a concluding statement.

Sentence starters:
However, one possible weakness is…
In the future, this character may…

Requirements

• Three complete paragraphs
• At least two specific examples from Chapters 1–4
• At least one integrated quotation
• Clear explanation after each example
• Formal school-appropriate language

Animal Farm Chapter 3-4 spelling!~

Toil — to work very hard for a long time.

Shirk — to avoid doing work or taking responsibility.

Implement — a tool used to complete a job, especially farm work.

Obstinate — stubborn and unwilling to change your mind or behaviour.

Maxim — a short statement that expresses a rule or belief.

Apathy — a lack of interest, concern, or emotion.

Ignominious — embarrassing or shameful.

Retreat — to move away from danger or an enemy.

Ambush — a surprise attack from a hidden position.

Impromptu — done without planning or preparation.

 

Animal Farm Chapter 1: Spelling!

 Quiz on Friday

ensconced — settled comfortably and securely in a place

scullery — a small room near a kitchen used for washing dishes and cleaning

benevolent — kind, generous, and willing to help others

tyranny — cruel or unfair rule by a person or government

rebellion — an organized attempt to resist or overthrow authority

comrades — companions or fellow members of a group

slaughter — the killing of animals or people in large numbers

concealed — hidden or kept out of sight

majestic — grand, impressive, or dignified

unanimously — with everyone in complete agreement

English 10 Adapted: ESSAY TOPICS!

 Essay topics for Harrison Bergeron.

1. How does Kurt Vonnegut use George and Hazel to develop his message about the dangers of forced equality in "Harrison Bergeron"?
2. What does the story suggest is more dangerous: too much power or people who stop thinking for themselves? 

English 10 Adapted

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English 12: Hamlet Essay

Here are some famous quotes from Camus and Sartre:

Jean-Paul Sartre

1. “Man is condemned to be free.”
2. “Existence precedes essence.”
3. “Hell is—other people!”
4. “It is up to you to give life a meaning.”

Albert Camus

5. “The absurd is born of this confrontation between the human need and the unreasonable silence of the world.”
6. “The meaning of life is the most urgent of questions.”
7. “One must imagine Sisyphus happy.”
8. “There is no sun without shadow.”

These quotes can be used to support your position in the synthesis.

Topic 1 — Freedom and Choice

Jean-Paul Sartre states, “Man is condemned to be free.”

Using this quotation as a central piece of evidence, analyze how Hamlet struggles with freedom, responsibility, and decision-making throughout the play.

• directly quote and analyze Sartre,
• incorporate evidence from Hamlet,
• explain how Hamlet’s choices shape his tragedy.

Topic 2 — The Search for Meaning

Albert Camus argues that “The meaning of life is the most urgent of questions.”

To what extent does Hamlet explore humanity’s search for meaning in a world filled with suffering, corruption, and death?

• directly quote and analyze Camus,
• use evidence from multiple scenes in Hamlet,
• explain whether Hamlet ultimately discovers meaning or remains uncertain.

Topic 3 — Identity and Self-Creation

Sartre claims that “Existence precedes essence.”

How does Hamlet struggle to define his identity throughout the play?

• directly engage with Sartre’s quotation,
• analyze Hamlet’s changing roles and behavior,
• argue whether Hamlet creates his own identity or becomes trapped by expectations placed upon him.

English 12 Essay Prep

For our essay, we will be looking at two philosophers closely - Jean Paul Sartre, and Albert Camus. In the context of Hamlet:

• Camus → absurdity and meaninglessness
• Sartre → freedom and responsibility
• Hamlet → trapped between both

Camus
The world does not give us clear meaning.

Humans want:
justice
certainty
purpose

But the universe gives:
silence
confusion
death

This conflict is the absurd

Sartre
Humans are “condemned to be free.”

Meaning:
we always choose
even refusing to act is a choice
we are responsible for our actions
excuses cannot fully remove responsibility

This creates:
anxiety
guilt
pressure

What advice would Camus give? Sartre?

Hamlet cannot decide whether to kill Claudius.

Hamlet feels life is meaningless after his father’s death.

Ophelia feels trapped by expectations.

Hamlet worries the ghost may be lying.

Hamlet delays action because he fears consequences.

Hamlet Soliloquies

Here they are:

1. Act I Scene 2: Oh, that this too too solid flesh would melt...
2. Act II Scene 2: Now I am alone...
3. Act III Scene 1: To be, or not to be...
4. Act III Scene 3: Now might I do it pat...
5. Act IV Scene 4: How all occasions do inform against me...

Macbeth Soliloquies

 

1. Act I, Scene 5, Glamis thou art: Glamis thou art… (line 14-29)
2. Act I, Scene 5, Unsex me here: The raven himself is hoarse (line 41 - 57)
3. Act I, Scene 7, Vaulting Ambition: He’s here in double trust… (line 1 - 28)
4. Act II, Scene 1, The Dagger Speech: Is this a dagger which I see before me? (line 40 - 71)
5. Act III, Scene 1, A Fruitless Crown: To be thus is nothing; but to be safely thus… (line 52 - 76)
6. Act V, Scene 1, Insanity: Out spot. (only her lines - page 213)

List of scenes Hamlet

 Act 1, Scene 1: Elsinore. A platform before the castle.

Act 1, Scene 2: A room of state in the castle.
Act 1, Scene 3: A room in Polonius' house.
Act 1, Scene 4: The platform.
Act 1, Scene 5: Another part of the platform.

Act 2, Scene 1: A room in POLONIUS' house.
Act 2, Scene 2: A room in the castle.

Act 3, Scene 1: A room in the castle.
Act 3, Scene 2: A hall in the castle.
Act 3, Scene 3: A room in the castle.
Act 3, Scene 4: The Queen's closet.

Act 4, Scene 1: A room in the castle.
Act 4, Scene 2: Another room in the castle.
Act 4, Scene 3: Another room in the castle.
Act 4, Scene 4: A plain in Denmark.
Act 4, Scene 5: Elsinore. A room in the castle.
Act 4, Scene 6: Another room in the castle.
Act 4, Scene 7: Another room in the castle.

Act 5, Scene 1: A churchyard.
Act 5, Scene 2: A hall in the castle.

King Cladius: Close Reading - III.iii

Analyze how Shakespeare reveals Claudius’ inner conflict through literary devices, imagery, structure, and diction.

 
Part 1: Annotation 

• Students annotate the soliloquy for:
• Religious imagery
• References to corruption/decay
• Contrasts or paradoxes
• Rhetorical questions
• Emotional shifts
• References to kingship/power
• Words connected to guilt or forgiveness

In the Language

• lines that seem sincere
• lines that seem self-serving
• moments where Claudius contradicts himself